Genre-specific premise: choose a problem that can be solved with a framework
Start with a problem that managers and founders can recognize immediately and act on. Good premise statements include: (1) the context (team, function, stage, constraint), (2) the recurring failure mode, and (3) the kind of change your reader can make. A premise formula: “I’m writing to help [audience] solve [specific recurring problem] by using [your framework/method], so you can [measurable outcome in behavior or decisions].” Avoid broad premises like “How to be a better leader.” Make it narrower: “How to run operating reviews that surface constraints and lead to decisions,” “How to design a pricing experiment roadmap for a subscription product,” or “How to build a sales qualification process that prevents deals from stalling.” To confirm the premise, write two pages answering: What is the most common mistake people make here? What does the first correct decision look like? What should change after 30 days? If you can’t answer those, the topic may be too vague for a business book.